I like the expressive lines. Looks very animated, as if the objects are dancing. Your directional lines are very good too. Lot of variety in length, width, and spacing. Plus you have a lot of evenness and straightness.
Great variety of expressive lines and directional lines. I like how you filled up both pages but it still doesn't look like too much...in other words everything fits together.
I feel like you enjoyed working on these and gave it thought before digging in. I particularly like your directional lines. Using the light, but tighter, lines on the right and the heavy thick lines on the left makes this such a strong piece overall.
I like the expressive lines. Looks very animated, as if the objects are dancing. Your directional lines are very good too. Lot of variety in length, width, and spacing. Plus you have a lot of evenness and straightness.
ReplyDeleteGreat variety of expressive lines and directional lines. I like how you filled up both pages but it still doesn't look like too much...in other words everything fits together.
ReplyDeleteI feel like you enjoyed working on these and gave it thought before digging in. I particularly like your directional lines. Using the light, but tighter, lines on the right and the heavy thick lines on the left makes this such a strong piece overall.
ReplyDeleteWell done.